[death note] inertia
Dec. 19th, 2006 12:26 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Another Death Note fic. I'm not happy with it, but I've been staring at it for hours and I don't want to deal with it anymore. LightxL slash, not worth an NC-17, but definitely a hard R for sexin'.
Summary: It is a battle of a different kind, though no less brutal.
inertia
(recollect me darling raise me to your lips.)
He is not in love.
Nothing even close, really.
L's body arches against his, and he smiles brutally - despite the haze of pleasant stimulation, he is clearly in control.
How strange, Light thinks; L does not react like a lover should. He will not drag any sound beyond a throaty growl from those thin, sugar-coated lips. Reedy fingers may scramble and fist into the sheets and the tender flesh of his back and thighs, but those dark eyes will never close, not even at the peak. It is a battle for dominance, one of the more interesting ways they fight. (And they do. It is savage and animalistic, teeth and nails and sweat and one would think they are trying to rip each others' throats open with the sheer force of their lovemaking, if it could even be called that. They fuck like enemies. They are an even match.)
Even now, even while L's sharp white hips grind against him in obvious challenge, the detective is searching for Kira in his touch.
That suits Light just fine.
L's bottomless stare tracks each movement: analytical, emotionless, simply waiting for the slip. Perhaps he has learned to school his emotions better than Light; perhaps he simply does not care. Either way, Light thinks that perhaps he's losing, and the thought drives him mad.
For a moment, Light hates him more than he has ever hated anything. He wants nothing more than to destroy those black, black eyes, to force a scream of something from the cadaverous man beneath him. Anything at all. With a soft cry of frustration, he bows his head against L's pale chest, rocking forward hard enough to push L six inches closer to the headboard, hard enough to exact a shallow gasp of pain.
It's not enough.
Light jerks the chain that binds them harshly to one side, snarling like a dog as the aluminum links tighten around L's throat. When he raises his head, there is no mistaking the touch of madness gleaming in his dark eyes.
L's mouth shapes the words slowly, lazily. Twenty-seven percent.
Fuck you, Light hisses, but it's too late, and the slick clenching heat of L's body is too much. His body spasms and twitches as he comes, clutching the chain hard enough to leave bruises against his palm. L follows suit soundlessly, the only indication of his own release a shudder that travels the length of his body, and the sticky pool of warmth spreading between them. Perhaps he is excited by the pressure against his throat. Perhaps it is something else entirely.
Light knows he has lost. He holds the chain there a moment longer (waits for the madness to retreat), breath coming in sharp, stacatto gasps before releasing it and collapsing to his elbows. He shifts, burying his face in the damp curve of L's neck. "Why," he murmurs thickly, "are you so fucking cold?"
He is still inside him.
L snorts softly, turning his head away from the warm, soft face so close to his own. In this war, he thinks, it is impossible to leave unscathed.
"What does it matter?" L returns softly, and if Light were watching, he would see dark eyes flutter closed, a bleak look slipping across L's face. His voice does not tremble. "You don't care at all."
-fin
18.12.06
I reallyreally need to stop writing porns and get my KH secret santa fic done. Speaking of porns ... I swore I'd never write them again. Oops, huh?
Also, anyone familiar with the Death Note universe that wouldn't be interested in being an idea-beta for me? I just want to throw some ideas for an epic!AU at you and see if it wouldn't work, at least a little. If interested, email/g-talk me (shiikuATgmail) or AIM (roketto rabu).
Summary: It is a battle of a different kind, though no less brutal.
inertia
(recollect me darling raise me to your lips.)
He is not in love.
Nothing even close, really.
L's body arches against his, and he smiles brutally - despite the haze of pleasant stimulation, he is clearly in control.
How strange, Light thinks; L does not react like a lover should. He will not drag any sound beyond a throaty growl from those thin, sugar-coated lips. Reedy fingers may scramble and fist into the sheets and the tender flesh of his back and thighs, but those dark eyes will never close, not even at the peak. It is a battle for dominance, one of the more interesting ways they fight. (And they do. It is savage and animalistic, teeth and nails and sweat and one would think they are trying to rip each others' throats open with the sheer force of their lovemaking, if it could even be called that. They fuck like enemies. They are an even match.)
Even now, even while L's sharp white hips grind against him in obvious challenge, the detective is searching for Kira in his touch.
That suits Light just fine.
L's bottomless stare tracks each movement: analytical, emotionless, simply waiting for the slip. Perhaps he has learned to school his emotions better than Light; perhaps he simply does not care. Either way, Light thinks that perhaps he's losing, and the thought drives him mad.
For a moment, Light hates him more than he has ever hated anything. He wants nothing more than to destroy those black, black eyes, to force a scream of something from the cadaverous man beneath him. Anything at all. With a soft cry of frustration, he bows his head against L's pale chest, rocking forward hard enough to push L six inches closer to the headboard, hard enough to exact a shallow gasp of pain.
It's not enough.
Light jerks the chain that binds them harshly to one side, snarling like a dog as the aluminum links tighten around L's throat. When he raises his head, there is no mistaking the touch of madness gleaming in his dark eyes.
L's mouth shapes the words slowly, lazily. Twenty-seven percent.
Fuck you, Light hisses, but it's too late, and the slick clenching heat of L's body is too much. His body spasms and twitches as he comes, clutching the chain hard enough to leave bruises against his palm. L follows suit soundlessly, the only indication of his own release a shudder that travels the length of his body, and the sticky pool of warmth spreading between them. Perhaps he is excited by the pressure against his throat. Perhaps it is something else entirely.
Light knows he has lost. He holds the chain there a moment longer (waits for the madness to retreat), breath coming in sharp, stacatto gasps before releasing it and collapsing to his elbows. He shifts, burying his face in the damp curve of L's neck. "Why," he murmurs thickly, "are you so fucking cold?"
He is still inside him.
L snorts softly, turning his head away from the warm, soft face so close to his own. In this war, he thinks, it is impossible to leave unscathed.
"What does it matter?" L returns softly, and if Light were watching, he would see dark eyes flutter closed, a bleak look slipping across L's face. His voice does not tremble. "You don't care at all."
-fin
18.12.06
I reallyreally need to stop writing porns and get my KH secret santa fic done. Speaking of porns ... I swore I'd never write them again. Oops, huh?
Also, anyone familiar with the Death Note universe that wouldn't be interested in being an idea-beta for me? I just want to throw some ideas for an epic!AU at you and see if it wouldn't work, at least a little. If interested, email/g-talk me (shiikuATgmail) or AIM (roketto rabu).
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Date: 2006-12-19 08:16 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-19 08:23 am (UTC)(Aah, MUCC or Cohen? Both are wonderful.)
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Date: 2006-12-19 11:38 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-19 11:47 am (UTC)Hee, I had to stare at your icon for a moment. I had just caught it out of the corner of my eye, and I was like ... dude, did he just smile at me? O_O It's late, and I'm at work and v. tired.
(Also, I fangirl your DN art. ♥ Randomly.)
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Date: 2006-12-19 04:13 pm (UTC)And I have to leave now so this comment can't be as detailed as I'd like, but I'm definitely adding this fic to my memories. ^^
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Date: 2006-12-20 06:01 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-19 04:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-20 06:03 am (UTC)I think Sir Cohen makes any smut a touch classier. At least, I hope. XD
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Date: 2006-12-19 06:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-20 06:08 am (UTC)This wouldn't leave me alone, though, and I figured the psychological bits outweighed the buttsecks. Also, I just can't argue with the muses. :x
I don't intend to make a habit out of it, though. >.>
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Date: 2006-12-19 06:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-20 06:12 am (UTC)Musical references creep into my stuff sometime; I blame this on the fact that I'm absolutely gay for good music. The 'sliding scale' line (and the subtitle, ironically) is pilfered from "Inertia Creeps" (guess who was digging through lyrics looking for title inspiration, hurr) by Massive Attack, which is just yum.
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Date: 2006-12-19 11:36 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-20 06:13 am (UTC)Thank you; I'm glad you liked it!
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Date: 2006-12-20 12:19 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-20 06:17 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-20 04:27 am (UTC)can i just say that i loved this bit? "It is savage and animalistic, teeth and nails and sweat and one would think they are trying to rip each others' throats open with the sheer force of their lovemaking, if it could even be called that. They fuck like enemies. They are an even match."
and this bit too "Light jerks the chain that binds them harshly to one side, snarling like a dog as the aluminum links tighten around L's throat...L's mouth shapes the words slowly, lazily. Twenty-seven percent."
it's all so fricking perfect *sighs*
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Date: 2006-12-20 06:21 am (UTC)I picture they would be a little scary in bed; it doesn't matter who is uke physically, there's gonna be a brawl, hehe. Also, the phrase "make love" really squicks me for some reason. It just seemed like the appropriate word to use, circumstantially.
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Date: 2006-12-20 06:19 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-20 06:27 am (UTC)(Also, ee, Gackt. I'm a big fan of everything pre-seventh night. If you're into it, I've got moon child fic down the page, because Gackt/Hyde vampire angst is bitey love.)
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Date: 2006-12-20 07:07 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-20 10:52 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-12-25 03:36 am (UTC)what else can you say..reallly....lol
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Date: 2006-12-25 05:55 pm (UTC)Anyway...
This was absolutely fucking brilliant! *beams* You win so many internets for this, and I don't really think I can keep count. They were really in character; the cold, searing passion between the two of them, and the sheer enmity that just sizzled - I could positively feel it seeping through the text. You chose your words really well, and your L and Light here have some of the best characterisations I've ever read. (It's also so like L to just mouth 'twenty-seven percent' lazily in the middle of a savage fucking session with Light. God! I think I died from the utter love I felt for that line.)
Please do keep up the good work! =) I'll be waiting for more of your amazing little masterpieces. Oh, and I do believe you've found yourself a new
stalkerfan of your works. Heh. ♥no subject
Date: 2006-12-27 05:30 pm (UTC)I'm gonna stalk your fictions toono subject
Date: 2007-01-10 01:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-01-12 01:45 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-02-11 10:17 pm (UTC)--but you made it work, and that makes me very very happy. ♥ Skipped over here from ff.net (I'm 'Saulie'?) to friend your fic journal. Mmmm, adversarial tension is the best.
And your characterization of L. ♥
Doubly impressive since I know how effin' elusive that guy is. Auuugh.Hope to see more Death Note from you~~!
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Date: 2007-02-12 10:53 am (UTC)Unf unf unfI mean, hi there some more. <3It's not like I've fawned over your stuff at ff.net and come to your journal, pointer hovering over the 'add' button for several minutes before backing off in fear of an add-back and inevitable tainting of your friendlist with occasional blocks of uncool. Orz. D:I'm actually with you on the sex thing; I'm kind of under the impression that everyone seems too busy being evil/devious/what-have-you to get naked with each other, even in the off-page time. Plus, I'm under the impression that a lot of goodfic is brought down by gratuitous porn. >.<
(Strangely enough, I'm fairly positive that this whole thing was brought on by my neglected love of Seishirou-types. There's a guy who'll teach a writer a thing or two about being a cold unfeeling bastard in the sack.)
I'm glad you liked it, very much so.
Doubly so since you're one of my absolute favorite Death Note writers evereverEVER. Eeeee.I'll be putting out some more DN fic as soon as I can pry myself away from the current design project I've got going. Too much to do, too little time and all that jazz. T___T
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Date: 2007-03-05 10:57 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-12-22 07:09 am (UTC)*hugs my friend*
Such awesome fic. =]