This was just beautiful. My god, just lovely. The flow of it, the longing and darkness and hope...all of it so wonderfully executed.
I just love coming across something with so much depth and that uses such gorgeous words and phrases. I just fell in utter love with that last section, but the last sentence in particular. There was so much sorrow in their lives, but you've given it that spot of hope that is so heartbreaking, yes, because you just don't know when that hope will be fulfilled, but it's beautiful as well.
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I just love coming across something with so much depth and that uses such gorgeous words and phrases. I just fell in utter love with that last section, but the last sentence in particular. There was so much sorrow in their lives, but you've given it that spot of hope that is so heartbreaking, yes, because you just don't know when that hope will be fulfilled, but it's beautiful as well.
Really stunning work.