....♥ ♥ ♥ Okay, so you said you'd written more DN fic, so I had to read this, and it is so amazingly pretty. I CAN'T EVEN MAKE ENOUGH HEARTS.

This just completely captures the feeling of Death Note, and the parentheses are a really nice touch. (I especially love Light's section, too; the ending of it just... really hurt, I guess.)

And I really really have to leave now, but much love to both fics! ^^